GAH!!!!!

okay, so everybody has been trashing breaking dawn. which does NOT deserve it! it my favorite book EVER! i dont see why ppl dont like it! i thought the writing was good along with the editing and choices in what happened. like the war with the voultri? i thought it was pretty good, i mean she could have put some more action in it, i will say that, but i can see why she couldnt start too much fighting! plus, things like that DO happen! you could be preparing for the worst possible outcome and then nothing major happens. heres how i say she could have made the ending: after the voultri come and edward is walking over to aro, bella shoots her shield up. giggles (of course), and THEN she realizes she isnt protecting EVERYONE, just the people closest to her meaning edward, renesmee, carlisle, esme, emmett, rosalie, and jacob (which includes jacobs pack since... well you know if youve read the book) because shes had the longest time getting to know them, so its easier to shield them, but she has to contract it away from edward because aro needs to hear his thoughts. after a while edward comes back and she shields him again, the voultri say they will choose a verdict, and then janes first attack comes on. kate gets hit, and is writhing on the ground, bella screams, and THEN her shield goes over everyone on her side, kate stops writhing and bounces up. the shield already tight against their bodies. zafrina blinds the voultri so they dont know where to attack. edward hears from zafrina and kate that bella was shielding and tells carlisle. carlisle says "aro, caius, demetri, and marcos. please dont let it come to a fight. you know we have the advantage. all we want to know is if you will let remesmee free or if you want to look weak and lose." then alice comes in and the rest of the story falls into place. sound better???? idk..... i g2g ttyl! <333Alice